My Country Poem

What i have so far:

 

I love a bright and sunny country 

Where it hardly ever gets cold 

I love a tanned and burnt country 

And the sun is like liquid gold 

 

I love a cheering country 

Of happiness, green and gold 

Where no matter if your black or white 

Or young, middle or old 

 

I love a beach side country 

With water far and wide 

Frolick, play, fun and sand 

Along the rising tide.

Hmm.

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One Response to “My Country Poem”

  1.   Bronwyn G Says:
    April 30th, 2006 at 6:26 am

    I don’t know you or your abilities as a poet, but you really shouldn’t undercut your abilities like this.

    All I shall know is that you tried your best to paint pictures in words and express your feelings about your country and our land.